PART 1—Intro Paragraph Peer Review
- Visit the Stakes and Introductory Post
- Choose from the introductory paragraphs— Find one writer’s choice to compliment. Analyze why you think their choice worked.
- Find one text you want to help make stronger. Please make your suggestion as specific as possible. For example, if the position statement lacks a so what, can you suggest a so what? If the introduction is too cluttered with detail, what could that paragraph stand to lose?
- POST YOUR REACTIONS AS A REPLY TO YOUR PEER’S PARAGRAPH.
PART 2—Reflection on Intro Paragraph Peer Review:
- ON YOUR SITE AS BLOG #4
- Write a 100-150 word reflection on your experience complimenting and critiquing a peer’s text. Please list one thing you learned that you can apply to your own intro paragraph and LINK to the page with your comment.
BLOG 4:
http://hlittle1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/learning-from-peer-editing-4/
http://ogagne.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4-reflection-on-intro-paragraph-peer-review/
^^^ Blog 4: http://ogagne.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4-reflection-on-intro-paragraph-peer-review/
blog #4 : http://mrogers5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4/
Blog 4: http://cchampagne1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4/
Blog 4: http://adube5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/peer-editing-review/
Blog #4: http://ngosselin1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
BLOG 4: http://twilliams13.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
http://kjillson.uneportfolio.org
Blog #4 ^
http://jrusselliv.uneportfolio.org/
http://inelson1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
One thing I learned that I can apply to my own intro paragraph is that I really like the way posing a question seems to draw the reader in more so than setting a scene does.
http://jtravassos.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-post-4/
http://emeyer2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critiques/
Blog #4: http://emeyer2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critiques/
Blog #4: http://ekrueger1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
Blog 4:
http://amueller1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4-critiquing-peers-texts/
http://aahmed4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critique-reflection/
^ Blog 4:
Blog 4: http://sflynn3.uneportfolio.org/
Blog 4: http://nblangiardi.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
http://pbelsky.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
Blog #4: http://hlatulippe.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
Blog #4: http://egardner2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
http://elederman.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/peer-review-blog-4/
http://nscarfo.uneportfolio.org
Blog #4
Blog #4: http://mbecker4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
Blog #4: http://emacdonald7.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
Blog #4 : http://jeppright.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/post-4/
http://galmeida.uneportfolio.org/
I know this is late, my apologies.
Better late than never! Thanks for sending! 🙂
http://kmorrissette1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/09/blog-4/
Blog 4: http://spepper.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/11/blog-4/