Blog #7: Read W-4 (Developing Paragraphs) in Little Seagull pages 17-29. This section presents strategies for (a) tightening an unfocused paragraph, (b) developing a claim and overall argument, and (c) smoothing out choppy or incoherent sentences. Please revise (or completely rewrite) two paragraphs based on your reading. Please document and share these changes along with the sections in W-4 that inspired you to make them. (You can take a “before and after” screenshot or cut-and-paste into your blog.)
Briefly summarize the changes you made and discuss how you feel these changes have affected your composition overall. Bring Little Seagull and laptop to class (est. time 90 minutes)
ocigna
Blog 7: https://ocigna.uneportfolio.org/2018/09/30/blog-7/
cmontanile
https://cmontanile.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
syake
https://syake.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
sdupont2
Blog #7: https://sdupont2.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
vkehoe
https://vkehoe.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/revisions/
https://vkehoe.uneportfolio.org/2018/09/29/first-drafts/
tcasey
Blog #7:
https://tcasey.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
sgrennell
blog #7 https://sgrennell.uneportfolio.org/?p=46&preview=true
mremavich
https://mremavich.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
jlee47
https://jlee47.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/53/
tmara1
Blog 7: https://tmara1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7/
Mary Kate
Blog #7:
https://malger.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
ryan sheahan
Blog #7 https://rsheahan1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
ebox
Blog #7
https://ebox.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
cbirch2
https://cbirch2.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
pfox1
https://pfox1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog7/
ldarcy
blog #7 https://ldarcy.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/75/
dperreault1
Blog #7: https://dperreault1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
ccrocker1
https://ccrocker1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/revisions-to-my-essay/
vbowler
https://vbowler.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7-rewrite-of-two-paragraphs/
Syris Hackett
Blog #7: https://shackett2.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog7/
tmcpartlin
Blog 7 https://tmcpartlin.uneportfolio.org/2018/09/30/blog-7/
Taylor
https://tfowler1.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
mmclaughlin10
Blog 7:https://mmclaughlin10.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/blog-7/
jlaurie
BLOg #7 https://jlaurie.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/02/revising-paragraphs/
edupler
Blog #7: https://edupler.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/03/blog-7/
jcrocker5
https://jcrocker5.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/01/blog-7-paragraph-revision/
emedeiros4
https://emedeiros4.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/04/blog-7/
ireis
Blog #7:
https://ireis.uneportfolio.org/2018/10/11/blog-7/