Choose from the introductory paragraphs— Find one writer’s choice to compliment. Analyze why you think their choice worked.
Find one text you want to help make stronger. Please make your suggestion as specific as possible. For example, if the position statement lacks a so what, can you suggest a so what? If the introduction is too cluttered with detail, what could that paragraph stand to lose?
POST YOUR REACTIONS AS A REPLY TO YOUR PEER’S PARAGRAPH.
PART 2—Reflection on Intro Paragraph Peer Review:
ON YOUR SITE AS BLOG #4
Write a 100-150 word reflection on your experience complimenting and critiquing a peer’s text. Please list one thing you learned that you can apply to your own intro paragraph and LINK to the page with your comment.
One thing I learned that I can apply to my own intro paragraph is that I really like the way posing a question seems to draw the reader in more so than setting a scene does.
hlittle1
BLOG 4:
http://hlittle1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/learning-from-peer-editing-4/
ogagne
http://ogagne.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4-reflection-on-intro-paragraph-peer-review/
ogagne
^^^ Blog 4: http://ogagne.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4-reflection-on-intro-paragraph-peer-review/
mrogers5
blog #4 : http://mrogers5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4/
cchampagne1
Blog 4: http://cchampagne1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/blog-4/
adube5
Blog 4: http://adube5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/peer-editing-review/
ngosselin1
Blog #4: http://ngosselin1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
twilliams13
BLOG 4: http://twilliams13.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
kjillson
http://kjillson.uneportfolio.org
kjillson
Blog #4 ^
jrusselliv
http://jrusselliv.uneportfolio.org/
inelson1
http://inelson1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
jtravassos
One thing I learned that I can apply to my own intro paragraph is that I really like the way posing a question seems to draw the reader in more so than setting a scene does.
http://jtravassos.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-post-4/
emeyer2
http://emeyer2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critiques/
emeyer2
Blog #4: http://emeyer2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critiques/
ekrueger1
Blog #4: http://ekrueger1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
amueller1
Blog 4:
http://amueller1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4-critiquing-peers-texts/
aahmed4
http://aahmed4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/introduction-critique-reflection/
aahmed4
^ Blog 4:
sflynn3
Blog 4: http://sflynn3.uneportfolio.org/
nblangiardi
Blog 4: http://nblangiardi.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
Parker Belsky
http://pbelsky.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
hlatulippe
Blog #4: http://hlatulippe.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
egardner2
Blog #4: http://egardner2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
elederman
http://elederman.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/peer-review-blog-4/
nscarfo
http://nscarfo.uneportfolio.org
nscarfo
Blog #4
mbecker4
Blog #4: http://mbecker4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/07/blog-4/
emacdonald7
Blog #4: http://emacdonald7.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/blog-4/
jeppright
Blog #4 : http://jeppright.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/08/post-4/
galmeida
http://galmeida.uneportfolio.org/
I know this is late, my apologies.
elishaemerson
Better late than never! Thanks for sending! 🙂
kmorrissette1
http://kmorrissette1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/09/blog-4/
Sierra Pepper
Blog 4: http://spepper.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/11/blog-4/