Read W-4 (Developing Paragraphs) in Little Seagull pages 17-29. This section presents strategies for (a) tightening an unfocused paragraph, (b) developing a claim and overall argument, and (c) smoothing out choppy or incoherent sentences. Please revise (or completely rewrite) two paragraphs based on your reading. Please document and share these changes along with the sections in W-4 that inspired you to make them. (You can take a “before and after” screen shot or cut-and-paste into your blog.)
Briefly summarize the changes you made and discuss how you feel these changes have affected your composition overall.
cchampagne1
blog 7
http://cchampagne1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/15/blog-7/
ogagne
Blog 7: http://ogagne.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/16/blog-7-developing-my-paragraphs/
mrogers5
Blog #7 http://mrogers5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/16/blog-7/
nklaver
Blog #7: http://nklaver.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/16/blog-7/
hlittle1
BLOG 7:
http://hlittle1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/16/w-4-and-rewriting-body-paragraphs-7/
aahmed4
Blog 7: http://aahmed4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/18/developing-paragraphs/
kjillson
Blog 7
http://kjillson.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
jtravassos
http://jtravassos.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-post-7/
hlaclaire
http://hlaclaire.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
ngosselin1
Blog #7: http://ngosselin1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
twilliams13
BLOG 7: http://twilliams13.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
kmorrissette1
http://kmorrissette1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
adube5
Blog #7 http://adube5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
amueller1
Blog 7:
http://amueller1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7-developing-paragraphs/
Sierra Pepper
Blog 7: spepper.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
enelson7
http://enelson7.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-post-7/
rmuthyam
Blog 7: http://rmuthyam.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
Parker Belsky
http://pbelsky.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
emacdonald7
Blog #7: http://emacdonald7.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
Max Russell
http://jrusselliv.uneportfolio.org/
ekrueger1
Blog #7: http://ekrueger1.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
mbecker4
Blog 7: http://mbecker4.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
sflynn3
Blog 7: http://sflynn3.uneportfolio.org/
nblangiardi
Blog 7: http://nblangiardi.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
elederman
http://elederman.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
egardner2
Blog #7 http://egardner2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/19/blog-7/
adeguzman
BLOG #7: http://adeguzman.uneportfolio.org/?p=37&preview=true
jeppright
Blog #7 – http://jeppright.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7/
emeyer2
Blog 7: http://emeyer2.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/developing-my-paragraphs/d
djackson9
http://djackson9.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/blog-7-developing-paragraphs/
bpeters5
Blog 7: http://bpeters5.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/20/before-and-after/
galmeida
http://galmeida.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/21/blog-7/
hlatulippe
Blog #7: http://hlatulippe.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/21/blog-7/